Catch a Fish

• Artist: shelyka
• Description: Have fun reading it... hope u liked it.!! plz comment !!!
• Date: 11/06/2010
• Tags: catch fish

Catch a Fish
It takes more than a wish
To catch a fish
You take the hook
You add the bait
You concentrate
And then you wait
But not a bite
The fish don't have an appetite
So tell them what
Good bait you've got
And how your bait
Can hit the spot
His works a whole
Lot better than a fish
If you really want
To catch a fish

Comments

[kresha darkblood]

very true! very enjoyable

[ShySnowWhiteAnon]

I liked the first eight lines the most then sort of switched off. Love the ryhming. 5/5

[SickSoul420]

Much enjoyed 5/5 razz

[Super -_- Sly -_- Tony]

I like the uniform 4 syllable layout of your poem with a deviation on lines 1, 8, and 14.