- cry Wilt thou smile, When eyes see me? Or when my joyousness Is brought forth by thee? If you do not ask, How will thy know; What thou heart seeds; What I wish it would show! For I run 'round and 'round, Seeking thou reason why and, Hoping to find what thou heart hides; For i just won't give up and die!!!!!!
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- | Submitted on 04/13/2009 |
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- Title: Sadness
- Artist: PoeticWindstorm
- Description: this was a poem i wrote to my bf b4 we were together......i was tryin to show him i liked him.......and i knew he liked me back........ ^_^....but he was scared to ask me out......so i wrote this for him.....
- Date: 04/13/2009
- Tags: sadness heart smile joyousness
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- PoeticWindstorm - 04/26/2009
- LOL biggrin yes inyuahsi....the old language for me is very addicting when i use it in poetry......lol i dont really know why though, it just is lol thank u for the wonderful feedback....plz keep reading ^__^
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- Inyuashi 23 - 04/26/2009
- How interesting, your poetry is unique, you've got an interesting style. I wonder if we could help you cultivate that, I suppose I may as well invite you to the guild... Now then, you tend to use a little bit of old language, addicting isn't it? It can be truely wonderful to work with... Once more a 5/5, it amuses me.
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