A falling emotion...

• Artist: Rook219
• Description: I wrote this after going to a funeral. Didn't edit it one bit >< *points at self* This guy's lazy...
  
  On a sidenote, I've been getting tired of all these... how do you say... annoying and redundant "poems" that are being posted on Gaia's arena -_-' They sometimes lack depth or just don't express real feeling... To bad I'm not much better XD
• Date: 02/20/2009
• Tags: falling emotion

I see you but do you see me?
Your eyes don't flutter,
Your chest hangs still...
What's this... falling emotion?
Is this anger?
Is it desperation?
Can you hear me as I speak softly?
Do you hear my darkened words?
Is this hate?
Is it confusion?
Do you watch me as I gaze,
See how my eyes are downcast even when I stare up into the sky?
Is this madness?
Is it grief?
You aren't coming back are you...
You left to a place I don't know...
Is this sadness?
This is all of those things isn't it...
My heart falls...
Waiting to shatter...

Comments

[Taju]

yeah I know how you feel, whenever I read some of them they don't sound like they were written firm the person's heart...they sound fake at times. It is good that people write, but some just need more heart.
this was a great poem 5/5 :3

[Rook219]

Ok, more speciffically, when I said that, I meant that you have all these incessant poems that lack heart that are in the spotlight! There are better poems out there but they just aren't recognized... So many of them have great ideas and potential but it's so sad to watch -_-''

Blech, it's my take on things, shoot me if you want *bows*

[Dreamy Sundrops]

[On a sidenote, I've been getting tired of all these... how do you say... annoying and redundant "poems" that are being posted on Gaia's arena -_-' They sometimes lack depth or just don't express real feeling... To bad I'm not much better XD ]

Well they are expressing their feelings in the best way they can you have no right to critisize their art 1/4 for you.

[Hikaru1214]

good work...-_-