Happiness

• Artist: Miis Kira
• Description:
• Date: 10/16/2008
• Tags: happiness

Happiness

Happiness is a like a seed growing
inside you
Learning things When you feel happiness you glow and shine
you're happy and exicted like a flower opening
into a new life into a new world
Happiness is the Light to a new world!!!!

Winter
Winter is When the snow comes and make snow angels
You fell coldness Snow covering your whole body
Stepping on the snow,Snow balls are everywhere
you get hit Nice time for a warm hot chocolate!!!hmmmm

Comments

[str8_MExican]

this s**t suckz xD jk its good

[chellereign]

its really good for me. i cant even write soemthing like that. whenver i do its just ends up in the trash. I REALLY LIKE YOURS!!!!

[sublime_necromancer]

It's not a bad piece of writing. Everyone has their own style, so style wise, I can't really critique. Though, if free form is your style....then keep at it! Watch the grammar though ("your happy" should probably have been "you're happy" wink .