Broken

• Artist: Snowflower2007
• Description: Something I worte on how I really am...sorta.
• Date: 10/16/2008
• Tags: broken

All you see is a happy girl
one with no problems,
no worries.
But do you know
how on the inside I break?
Can you see past me?
You don't even know me.
As I smile,
my heart breaks.
You think that I have a good life,
but can you see past the
fake smile I forced?
If you think you understand
how much I hurt,
you can't even try to
understand.
Have youever felt to be so close
only to have it ripped away
from your grasp?
Have you ever tried to listen,
only listen,
to what someone has to say
about themselves?
Did you ever try to think
about why they are so happy?
So cheerful?
It could be that they
are trying to keep
what they have bottled inside
a secret.
Those poeple are hurt

Comments

[DaydreamersCosplay]

Hey really good job. I know how you feel I truely do. Life is a b***h and I get so depressed from it. I have more scars inside than outside and still no one notices. If I died the only ones who would truely miss me would be my bf, my gf, my friends Nikita, Ali, and Nicholas. Plus my dog Fudge. They keep me alive but truthly if not for my gf and bf I'd be dead right now. Keep writing, you're really good!

[Ayame_M]

its such a beautiful poem i kno how u feel i go thru the same thing everyday

[Heemo_Emo]

a great poem!keep it up!and don't forget to add me as your friend!