Upon a Warming Realization

• Artist: pretty hate machine
• Description: This is (sort of) of a continuation of Upon a Numbing Realization. As you'll notice in most of my poetry, I'm not a huge fan of rhyme schemes.
• Date: 09/21/2008
• Tags: upon warming realization

I slide my bare feet
along the frosty tile,
then peek around the white washed corner
hoping to catch a glimpse of you.
I stumble with uncoordinated legs
to the window to watch the sun rise.
I lean down to pick
a rose thorn from my toe,
and a red salty tear drop forms upon the skin.
But there's still no sign of you...

Comments

[-Aesthetix]

It's really nice. Made me feel warm. Short and sweet.
5/5!
Check out mine? (:

[AIeya]

Beautiful!

[iluvpolkadots]

Its short. I think with a little bit more thought, this could pull through. (and im with you on the rhyming thing, im no good at it)