Him

• Artist: Release The Penguin
• Description: Look, this really isn't a story...more of a vignette (a short peice with no dialogue, or main character, but it's not a poem). I may delete it cuz of low ratings or just too many confused people.
• Date: 12/30/2011
• Tags: missing boys love losses breakups

I miss him.
I miss the man with the quirky smile and big ears.
I miss the warmth on a cold night,
I miss the guy who was on the verge of tear when I told him, "We have to talk."
I miss the random sticky notes.
I miss the way he held my hand.
I miss how he horribly sung every Beatles song.
I miss how he planned our future,
I miss the gentleman who knew chivalry was not dead.
I miss just how he knew not only what to say, but to make it better.
I miss the person I knew a year ago.
I miss the one I fell in love with.
Do you know where he is?
Because all I see is a man with the same name, and similar appearance.
If you can find him, tell him this-
Tell him I love him.
It is obvious you are not him anymore.

Comments

[xXKayleaXx]

Just correct "... every Beatles sung." It should be song. However very strong, cute, and sad. I would classify it as a monologue, if that helps. 5/5

[vv7722]

"I miss the gentleman who knew chivalry was not dead" - Great line