Untitled Story.

• Artist: J u i c e h J u i c e
• Description: This story is about three girls. They all where best friends.....but only knew each other over the computer and no where else. There names are Andrea (Shes the main charater and lives in Haiti), Lillayah (Lives in the U.S) and Emillie (Lives in the U.K.) If you have a name for this story let me know =] Hope you like this <3
• Date: 02/16/2010
• Tags: untitled story

I looked at my laptop and smiled. I was talking to my best friends. Everyone looked at me as i typed on my computer. I was the only one who had a computer in Haiti, my father had sent it to me. I can't wait to see you Emillie! I typed to my friend. I was going to her house for awhile, she lived in the United Kingdom. I closed my laptop and stood up. I headed for the car that take me to the plane. I finally got onto the plane. I smiled and closed my eyes as I settled for long plane ride. I opened my eyes as someone shook me. I jumped up and tackled Emillie when I woke up. I smiled. "Hey Emi!!" I said then stood up. She laughed. "Hey Andi." she said. I garbed my two bags and followed them off the plane. I knew how to speak english just like Emillie knew how to our fathers showed us. We sat down into a black sleek car. I looked around and smiled. ~Unfinished...No Rude Comments Please~

Comments

[WaterJenny]

Separated by Miles for the title maybe? Cute. Need's some work.
You should have a new paragraph for each dialogue part.