my first and final luv

• Artist: bansheeangel24
• Description: ch1-when i started falling inlove
  actually its a prologue
• Date: 07/10/2009
• Tags: cant stop falling inlove

I was sitting on a bench, talking with my friends when suddenly I heard a man's voice. I didn't who he was but he really called my attention. When I looked back to see who he was, my face began to turn red(like this> redface ). As I look at him, there were sparkle, sparkle stuff around him. That's the time I fell in love to him.-Merrilyn

Comments

[Azrael Xavan]

its not going to make any top lists. you need to add more exciting stuff.

[bansheeangel24]

its just the beginning

[rsmietorri]

um...its ok, not the best ive ever read...not my top 3...but it was ok