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Breaking My Promise Breaking My Promise by Me You know that I'm gone I'll never be back again Cause tonight we are done We are done Cause I'm gone Now for the past seven days And of the past seven years I've been moving all along And now I'm drowning in my tears You've been breaking my promise And it not something I would miss Not something I would miss Why are you gone Why are we done Wont you come back Wont you come back home From the last seven minutes From the last seven hours I've been wishing for you But it is beyond my power Your not breaking my promise And your someone I would miss Someone I would miss Why are you gone (You know that I'm gone) Why are we done (Tonight we are done) Wont you come back? (i'll never be back again) Wont you come back home... [repeat 3x fade]

Posted by: Anikacy Wed Dec 24, 2008 @ 02:23am

The road of redemption is a long one, but I think I'm doing great so far.
Thank you.

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Mon Dec 29, 2008 @ 06:50am

LOL!!!! It's my song!!! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
U'd better promise me that you'll sing that to me or you're breaking your promise u made! lol!!! that's cute!!!

xx time to P A N ii C
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Tue Jan 20, 2009 @ 12:38am

[/raises hand to get ppl's attention]
=___________=;;;

Uhm...I just wanted to point something out to you...
I'll try not to be too mean, okies?? ^_____^;;;

The song...well...it's more like songs aren't too...uhm...'appealing'.
You always use the same tactic when writing songs. You also use the title in the song
too much. (as in repeating it over and over all throughout the song)
Also, you use the 'fade' thing too much. It's okay to use it and all, but you know...
And um...you also always ask a question during your bridges and have a little too much echoes too. You should place the echoes at more 'strategic' points so that it'll sound captivating.

I hope I'm not being too mean...I'm just trying to help and all so that you can improve.
``>___________<

Sakaki's telling me not to be mean, but someone has to point it out soon enough.
So, I did just that. If people don't point out your weaknesses and state criticisms, you won't be able to get better...

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