Sonnet #1

• Artist: Not So Serenity
• Description: I will write sonnets in an attempt to kick Shakespear's a** at his own game.
• Date: 01/09/2011
• Tags: sonnet

With the deep daring color red we then begin
The horrid color of war and flaming fire
There in the apple of Adam and Eve’s sin
Taking form of Dread's deep undying desire
Death's markings left behind in battle fields
Danger rears its temperamental torment
Bringing burning fire which resists no shields
Anger grows heavier bearing dark resent
Blood dribbles down the victim's pain filled face
Crimson life gone afar by passing away
Heart slows and loses its quickened pace
Color seizes its unsuspecting prey
Till yet then my answer has finally arose
Love is too represented by the reddest rose

Comments

[EarlsGarden]

ahaha i like how ur tryin to kick Shakespeare's *** but u still have a long way to go to beat him my friend (:

besides that, its pretty good, how bout a little challenge? put it in old english? LOL

[Witch Cr0wnd Queen]

Wow. Sonnets are really hard to match. Especially Shakespeare's. Nice!