Time.

• Artist: xXHarunaXx
• Description: I have a headache =.= XD
• Date: 04/11/2010
• Tags: time

How do you see me?
Too many nights with calls
Break down too many walls
Am I smiling?

How long have you known me?
Time seems too slow
As it was each other we got to know
Will you ever forget me?

How well did you know me?
No more am I broken
All the words never spoken
Am I whom you think?

How often do I cross your mind?
I'm going very far away
And I don't think I'm coming back someday
Will you think of me then?

How did you see me?
Feelings washed away with time
And all of me is completely mine
Did you ever see me?

Comments

[Scarlet_Teardrops]

It's nice that you begin and end each stanza with a question. I like it.
However, overall I'm not sure how much I enjoyed the poem. It seemed a little staggered to me. Then again, perhaps that was your intention.

[Princess Anime Angel11]

that's kind of cool!!<3!!

[bailybaby972]

super awsome amazingness is just radiating from this poem, lol i gota give it 5*s