Now

• Artist: Paper Crane Kiko
• Description: none
• Date: 12/11/2009
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Now

Life is looking up, but i still feel alone.
My heart has turned hard as a bone.
strong and powerful, yet easily broken.
I fee as thought nobody cares what I've spoken.
I rush to darkness for it is my ease.
I flock to shadow for it is my peace.
I long for love and long for night.
I long for my soul to be alright.
You tell me you love me and you kiss my cheek.
You make my heart thud and my knees weak.
But now you say we're just friends.
My belated happiness has come to an end.
So as I cry here in this place,
I've decided that I hate your face.
I hate your smile and your dark brown eyes.
So because of you I will forever cry.

Comments

[Paper Crane Kiko]

(this actually is about a guy) just sayin

[Macabre Forever]

that was beautiful and desolate but still;
quit stealing my emotions!

[kiwijian_01]

yea this is a good piece of work..well done....feel free to read some more of mine....ur work is very good...

[Eco-Ninja]

it's lovely, and conflicting. a perfect combo.

[Paper Crane Kiko]

thank you for your comment but i like to rhym.... DEAL WITH IT! i think it flows okay enough... i do understand what yu mean.... i could have put a better... (insert word of choice here)... into it...

[HTOB]

make the end line more of an impact
u dont hav to rhyme, it sounds better if u dont on a few lines

[Paper Crane Kiko]

please feel free to comment i love reading my readers thoughts!