Daybreak

• Artist: lunarXcrescent
• Description: Vote for me! >_<
• Date: 12/20/2008
• Tags: daybreak

Sunlight, pale and listless
Breaks upon a plain of
White
Dusting cold snow with
Golden glitter
Light dances, shimmering
Making it shine with radiance
Iridescent, Brilliant
The snow encrusted field
Glows with wisps of light
Where once there was none
The shattering of night

Comments

[pinkbunnygirlmoo]

I like it... its so great! But it reads funny... If you pause between eatch line it's choped, and if you only pause at the comma's you run out of breath!!! You may wan't to keep in mind how you wan't it to be read in the future. 4/5 =)

[Cowgirl5155]

sounds coolio~ =3