HEAVEN

• Artist: BlueFheiry
• Description: have you ever dreamt of heaven??? ^_^
  it must have been more than a place..
• Date: 12/03/2009
• Tags: heaven

HEAVEN
by BlueFheiry

I dream of a place, a place beyond place
unbounded by space, unbounded by partitions
beyond what mind can conceive
beyond what heart can receive

I dream of a time, a time beyond time
unclashed by memory, unclashed by regrets
beyond what spirit can endure
beyond what soul can nurture

I dream of a smile, a smile beyond smile
unstained by guilt, unstained by remedies
beyond what head can think
beyond what mouth can speak

I dream of a dance, a dance beyond dance
unstilled by shame, unstilled by neglects
beyond what rhythm can bring
beyond what music can sing

I dream of a sweet rest, a rest beyond true rest
unlimited by life, unlimited by joy
beyond what the world can offer
beyond what a martyr can suffer

Comments

[snakesta]

I like it a lot, it has a nice flow to it. How each stanza starts out with one line and then the following lines describe the perfect essence or even better essence of what we see. What we're unable to see and whats perfect is there you're able to describe without telling any details.