spiderwebs

• Artist: KatieCliche
• Description: bad relationship
• Date: 08/09/2009
• Tags: spiderwebs boyfriend love

Tangled in the spiderwebs
Just let me free I’ve got to go
Babe you make me powerless
I say I love you when I don’t
Like an iron fist you pin me down
Keep me spinning round and round
Know that I should let you see
But I don’t want to make you bleed
It’s like a stain, won’t wash away
And then I smile, ask you to stay

Stop
Now
Don’t say you love me
Pause
Now
Don’t make me lie
I
Never wanted to say this
I
Never want you to cry
But I
Can’t
Can’t take this no longer
Your body is my prison
Under your lips I die inside
I gotta make decisions

Don’t tell me I’m the perfect girl,
Whisper that I make your world
Don’t hold me tighter, be my fighter
I don’t want to hurt you
And still your kiss, it burns my lips
Your arms, they just confine me
And when your fingers graze my hips
Something screams inside me

Stop
Now
Don’t say you love me
Pause
Now
Don’t make me lie
I
Never wanted to say this
I
Never want you to cry
But I
Can’t
Can’t take this no longer
Your body is my prison
Under your lips I die inside
I gotta make decisions


I could feel you coming on
I could hear your breathing
Said tonight would be the night when
I would stop deceiving
But when you came just close enough
For me to set us straight
Something broke, my pride it melted
And I smiled, sugar sweet

Stop
Now
Don’t say you love me
Pause
Now
Don’t make me lie
I
Never wanted to say this
I
Never want you to cry
But I
Can’t
Can’t take this no longer
Your body is my prison
Under your lips I die inside
I gotta make decisions

Comments

[rawrmonsterluv]

that was really good.
you could feel that there was a rythm to it
5/5

[lalkaleliel]

I really like the meter of this poem. Was it meant to be a song? The repetition of some of the stanzas sound like they could be made into a melody.
Other than that, great job. The flow of this is wonderful and you have some great imagery.

[bloody_black_white_zebra]

wow that was also good i am breathless wow thats good