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I loved you before I met you.
But now I'll never meet you.
You fell from grace too soon.
I'd planned a life for you
- Title: I loved you
- Artist: OmfgADime
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Description:
Just alittle something I came up with for a private thread I am in,
I plan on adding a few more lines when I can think of what to write - Date: 07/20/2009
- Tags: loved meet life grace
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Dasuto - 07/20/2009
- its nice and sweet ^_^
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- Daddy Got This Account - 07/20/2009
- what if you add after, "i'd planned a life for you" what if you put, "a life for you and i"? and maybe after that you could put "but you fell away from me" and just kinda go off on that? just a suggestion. but i like the lines you have now. nice job. 5/5 and fav.
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- OmfgADime - 07/20/2009
- please comment and vote fairly I know theres not alot there but please give thoughts
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