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oxycotten in my veins
my heart stops when you speak my name
i will never be the same
words that used to keep me sane
now only bring me pain
the clock is ticking
your words are constant stinging
please stay with me
please,a word ithought i would never say
i knew you wanted to see me pay
- by DEMONWEAVER127 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/18/2009 |
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- Title: etreme pain without gain
- Artist: DEMONWEAVER127
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- Date: 07/18/2009
- Tags: etreme pain without gain
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Caleco - 08/15/2009
- again, i think this is amazing. you truly have some skills and its good to see they dont go to waist
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- mirages_life - 07/19/2009
- I read all of your stuff, but i think this may be your best. I love how it rhymes without taking away from the serious meaning of the poem. Good work! And thank you for your comment on my poetry!!! XD
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- Xx Archangel Vixen xX - 07/19/2009
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thats good
painful and deep,
but still gives the point
5/5 - Report As Spam
- xXHatred_ReincarnateXx - 07/18/2009
- nice i like this one 5/5
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