Grief

• Artist: xXDeath-By-IronyXx
• Description: Uh, I wrote this when I found out my uncle had a brain tumor. He's all better now, so no worries! I'm real proud of this poem, anyway.
• Date: 06/22/2009
• Tags: grief sadness depressed help hope

All the things we’ve done for you
All the things we’ve said.
Yet God says you won’t make it through.
It makes my gaze turn red.

What did you do to deserve this fate?
What crimes have you committed?
I guess there’s nothing I can do.
It’d be best if I submitted.

It’s hard to face this tragedy.
I can’t deal with this loss.
They tell me to move on with life.
Well who made them the boss?

They can’t tell me how to grieve
Can’t tell me how to deal.
And still the thought of loosing you…
I can’t tell you how I feel.

I must sound like a wimp to you
A miserable little fool.
I really don’t care what you think
If I did than it’d be cruel.

There’s not much else to say about this,
and I’m afraid that I might cry.
But when I need to think of you
I’ll just look up to the sky.

Comments

[12-NaHe-12]

i like it
the funny part is that its name like mine lol
but dont worry its not the same thing
still i love yours good use of words

[QUEEN_ OF_EVRIITHIN]

great use of rhyming. great choice of words. very deep and use of voice. over all wonderful job with this poem.