Down the Rabbit Hole!

• Artist: Draculai
• Description: It was inspired by a few people I use to know.
• Date: 05/23/2009
• Tags: down rabbit hole alice wonderland

Turn around,
And follow me down,
The rabbit hole.

Here, our world is Upside down,
And in fantasy drowned,
Our prescious never-ending dream.

Follow the white rabbit,
Dicreed her habit,
And not be lead the wrong way.

Meet the queen of the heart,
Learn of sweetness and of smart,
Don`t be an idiotic fool and decline her invitation.

Find the tree of the chessire cat,
Who is constantly stealing the Madhatter`s hat,
Just don`t stay to long to watch their fight!

Join the tea party hosted by the mad hatter,
Just be sure not to ask whats the matter,
If you go mad leave the party IMEDANTLY.

Now you see,
How mad we can be.

Return for a visit one day,
Just remember to come and play,
By coming down the rabbit hole!

Comments

[KxLEBxRAWRxx]

I dont think it worked out! It jut doesn't sound poetic to me! And maybe, instead of actually saying "The mad Hatter" "The Chesire cat" trying avoiding the use of their names! Just as an example i would say, "Find the tree of the cat! Who is always stealing the hat, away from a mad, mad man! ...He hosts the tea party! Where sweets aren't too tarty, but be careful, they will make you go mad." That is just an example, i guess it is a personal preference of mine!! But i will rate 3/5 sta