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People say roses are Beautiful,
People say they represent Love,
People say all beautiful things are Perfect,
But if that is True,
Then why do the thorns cause Pain?
Could it be that love isn't as perfect as everyone Believes?
Perfect...
Does it mean Beauty?
Or Pain?
- by Jessabella-hime |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/02/2009 |
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Comments (4 Comments)
- XxChildesh_GamesxX - 05/05/2009
- i really enjoyed this poem. i hope to see more of your work. ^_^ 5/5.
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- NebuChi3 - 05/05/2009
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@Gear001:
'believes' is the correct term to use.
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- Luminene - 05/03/2009
- I thought it was good! 1000/5 O.O wait,not possible?Okay...5/5 then!
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- Killa-Keyblade Master- - 05/02/2009
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Very short, I'm not too big on short poems, which are basically Haiku, but anyhow-
"Could it be that love isn't as perfect as everyone Believes?" Fix the "Believe" part and you have a 4/5 on your hands there. For now 3/5. - Report As Spam
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