Its a song

• Artist: Indecisive Thermostat
• Description: i was very bored when i wrote this.
• Date: 03/31/2009
• Tags: song

everyone says im weird
for being myself
i dont understand at all

They all say im strange
for liking a guy
but thats just me

everyone is telling me what to do
its driving me crazy
because this is me life
they cant take it away from me

so ill escape to my own world
were no one can judge me
everyone will like me for who i am

so im going to make that dream come true
i gonna escape to a different world
that i call my own

Comments

[AllenWolfe]

You did great but you need to use grammer. That counts alot in real life.

[Killvin]

^ ^ It's done quite well.. uses a lot of description.. though I do believe the diction.. word choice.. could be a bit better... my advice.. find something that sparks interest in you.. something you care about or have strong feelings for... and write about it... ^ ^ You're well on your way... and I think I'll give you .. a 4/5... just to be honest.. ^ ^'

[systemshutdowwnn]

heey
i am from the netherlands
so my englisch isn't very well
but that's realy deep
i am serieus
and I write about the same things as you
to get out and go to my own world
and this is realy good biggrin
i am serrieus
hugs you write buddy issy razz

[Indecisive Thermostat]

im soooooooooooooo bored