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It stops for none,
Not me, nor you
Time carries on
Flowing through,
Leaving a mark
and helping you heal
Time, beloved Time
- by Buttercup Veela |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/16/2009 |
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- Title: Time
- Artist: Buttercup Veela
- Description: Just a poem I wrote one day when i was feeling. . . profound.
- Date: 03/16/2009
- Tags: time
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Comments (4 Comments)
- The Wabbit - 04/28/2009
- Simply wonderful!
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- Aryain Flames - 04/09/2009
- honestly, i agree with 290! this rocks!
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- 290DarkStars - 03/23/2009
- C'MON! This is an awsome poem! buttercup should be encouraged to keep writing stuff like this! this is awsome stuff....so i'll give it err...1...o' ok! fine 5/5! Great poem! mainly because you grasped the image and gave it in a way that the reader could qurickly grasp it and get the right feel for it! Awsome job!
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- ladybabs - 03/19/2009
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I like it, but I think after through you should delete the all.
Because without it would flow better. I like it you've got a reference image :p
I'd rate it 4/5 - Report As Spam
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