Never

• Artist: Tinzing
• Description: I love him but I'm not sure about the future what will happen to us later I love him always
• Date: 01/06/2009
• Tags: never

The word stung in my heart like poison,
I fall to the ground gasping for breath as
the words sink in for ultimate pain everything
spinning out of control I felt like I was dieing
I didn't know that I could anyone could feel this much pain
dead inside I reach for him only to be pushed away by cold
hands never will I be held or loved the same way again
I whisper to my self " This isn't real he would never do this to me never."
I wake up screaming and crying his name.Startled by the touch i turn
around to see where the touch was from and there he was never
leavening my side for anything never I wrap my arms around him
never wanting to let go "I heard you,you talk in your sleep I will never leave you."

Comments

[Mattlikeshat]

cool poem

[Mattation4ever]

yo, yeah i no i shouldnt be commenting just wanted to say its good oh and you were right to say leave forever but one day we might be friends oh and im over you if you would liek to know. blackheart she wrote this not from the heart and from her view i dont think a suggestino wouldbe good. Cya tinzing good work have fun. peace.

From matt

[ScreamJuliet]

dat was a good peom but the last line "i heard you,you talk in your sleep i will never let you go" maybe a suggestion is "I heard you talk in your sleep and I'm here to say I will never let you go" other than dat good keep writing.

[l iHinata iSakura l]

that was a good poem mom ;D

[2_shelly_100]

I LOVE IT TINZING biggrin DDDDD