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The fountain of life.
Dreaming lasts only a while, but each one is so real,
reaching out, my desires I can touch and feel,
I crave it all so badly, to to each lust I am so denied,
Every wish was for naught, every tear I've cried,
Hope slowly fades away, with the passing of the sun
This gauntlet of sadness, each day I run,
Hunting for that final answer to take away my pain,
Certain paths are washed away with rain,
Water so pure, trickles from the fountain, clear,
I move to drink, casting away my fear,
Sipping of the cool wave in front of me,
I lay down to dream, for eternity...
- by Cottoncandyocbra3 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/03/2009 |
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- Title: Fountain of Life
- Artist: Cottoncandyocbra3
- Description: Something quite dark
- Date: 01/03/2009
- Tags: fountain life
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Comments (7 Comments)
- SirynECrow - 04/11/2009
- it is relaxing, but not necissarily in a good way. More like a drug-induced state of relaxation. Where everything is slipping away whether you care to stop it or not.
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- x__C r e a m - C h i - 01/21/2009
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Love the rhythm and the words..
its somewhat relaxing 5/5 - Report As Spam
- g-helper6699 - 01/19/2009
- really good poem 9/10 4.9/5
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- Bleuraven123 - 01/05/2009
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I really like it, really!! whee
I don't just love your endings... I really like the whole message and rhymes in the poem - Report As Spam
- dreamerlove8 - 01/03/2009
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one word:
WHOA
xD<3
luv it.(that's 2 words!!!!) - Report As Spam
- whitejade13 - 01/03/2009
- It's a good poem. I always love your endings best. 5/5
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- HetaNotocha - 01/03/2009
- I like it. It has much feeling and I like how the words rhyme like real, feel, denied and cried.
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