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The rain falls,
Like the tears
fall down my pink cheeks
They fall because of you--
The rain falls,
Like my love for you--
And my hope
For you to return
The rain falls,
On my face--
Making it hard for
You to tell that i am crying--
The rain stops--
When my heart
Stops beating for you,
And i stop breathing--
I fell like the rain,
A week after you left me--
The heart stops,
The breathing stops,
I stop the love.
- by xXMusic-Kicks-AssXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/02/2009 |
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- Title: The Rainfall
- Artist: xXMusic-Kicks-AssXx
- Description: This is a poem that my emo friend inspired me to do it. please rate and comment. oh and please look at my other stuff ^^ (This one might be similar to The Snow Falls, like me) About poem: A guy breaks up with a girl because he stops loving her. She commits suicide because she can't be with the one that she loves. So please enjoy the poem
- Date: 01/02/2009
- Tags: fall
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Dreamy iammom - 01/04/2009
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last para sucks.....write more
first para and second is great in rhythm....
dont feel bad...and dont make this poem sad sad
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- Black Ski - 01/03/2009
- Tell your friend, if she didn't sucided yet... to never sucide because, thats not gonna help you do anywhere, but most of all... nice poem. smile
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- Voldemort point two - 01/02/2009
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Interesting.
It reminds me a little of Romeo and Juliet. 5/5. - Report As Spam
- The Judged Book - 01/02/2009
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Romeo and Juliet in a modern day poem. Emo poem, but w/e.
Good poem! =] - Report As Spam
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