Highway of the Lost

• Artist: XPatheticxFallacyX
• Description: This poem's persona has lost some or is losing someone to death.
• Date: 01/01/2009
• Tags: highway lost

Walking down the highway, a razor by my side
And if they ask you
Just say it's suicide.

Take in the air
Breathe in deep now
Try not to fall asleep somehow

Hold my hand
Say you won't go
I thought what we had was mutual

Don't leave me!!
For i wouldn't know what to do
Please tell me what you are saying is not true

Just take my heart
Take it with you!!
Cause without you, it has no use.

And when I walk down the highway
A razor by my side
Just smile a say 'It's suicide'

Comments

[Atheshya]

You don't rhyme the whole way through, or in any concise pattern... which actually isn't glaringly obvious and may even be a good thing for the poem, but it's kind of...strange.

[xx-Nex-Serenus-Decorus-xx]

I love it....its so simple and yet so powerful...5/5!