piosoned love

• Artist: ruroukenluver13
• Description: about a girl who knows her boyfriend is trying to send her to hell to do tht he sends her poisoned black roses
• Date: 03/26/2009
• Tags: piosoned love black roses

u think its sweet to give me roses
u think the scent pleases noses
black as ink;tht they r
darker than black noir
a symbol of our poisoned love
scent to us from hell above
y would u send me this
y not give me just a kiss
r u trying to poison me
by sending me all of these
these r scars; poisoned scars
infecting me with black tar
cusre u a thousand times
sending me these is a crime
remind me of our poisoned luv
sent to us from hell above
filled with thorns
sharper than devil horns
made to poison me
sending me down to the blood red sea

Comments

[xcupcakesxbrokenheartx]

Um... you should really work on your spelling and grammar before letting other people read it. Take pride in your work! 2/5

[mychemicalimb4l4nce]

Better grammar would've been nice. So I could actually READ it. 3/5