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Being torn on the inside
Ridiculed by the
One you cared about.
Kidding yourself thinking you're fine, but
Everyone knows the truth; you're
Not fooling anyone and you know that your
Heart is surly not there.
Empty as it could get
A fate worse then death
Rediculous as it might sound, but
The evidence is there in your hollow chest
- by Moonlight_Maiden123 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/31/2008 |
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- Title: Broken Heart
- Artist: Moonlight_Maiden123
- Description: The truth inside a persons heart whenever its been crushed by someone they cared about and still care about.
- Date: 12/31/2008
- Tags: brokenheart
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Comments (7 Comments)
- scitama - 01/19/2009
- Wow, I don't usually see word poems this good. Nice job!
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- Darkskrye - 01/19/2009
- awesome, hon. smile
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- Phinagin2000 - 01/18/2009
- aww so sadly good! and i like that we both have poems that spell out words wink
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- Petaldancer108 - 01/11/2009
- I really loved this one. It speaks the truth.
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- Sid the Body Gaurd - 01/08/2009
- yes Iv writen somthing much like this and I know where Ur coming from. I like how U lined it up wich the words broken heart very new.
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- leolion1200 - 01/06/2009
- wonderful I give you a 5
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- sis295 - 01/02/2009
- Jess that was beautiful *sniff sniff* lol i love it
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