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When I first met you,
It was almost like a dream,
I saw the shine in your eyes,
it was a beautiful scene.
No matter how angry I seem,
I just want you to know,
You mean everything to me.
Like a match in the dark,
You found me,
and held me so tightly,
I could feel the warmth again.
scarlet cheeks,
and soft lips,
Sweet sufficating scent,
I can just remember this.
- by MindlessError |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/24/2008 |
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- Title: To the one I love.
- Artist: MindlessError
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Description:
This poem was written by me, and I'm sure it isn't good enough for some of you critics. Please just think about the poem befor you ramble on about how I copied someone elses work and stuff <3
::Merry Christmas/holidays::
:: Thank you for voting/commenting:: - Date: 12/24/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Adria Claire - 05/09/2009
- this is great! keep writting it's really cool!
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- Self Tragedy - 01/02/2009
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I love it! ^^ 5/5
Keep writting, I hope to see more! - Report As Spam
- BrokenSoul225 - 12/31/2008
- Awww, that's cute, though I think if you're going to start out rhyming you should probably keep going through the poem. I adore how you conveded so much emotion in only a couple stanza. Excellent 5/5
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- Toragu-Kun - 12/24/2008
- 5/5 <3
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