Death

• Artist: Mentir Sourire
• Description: just a poem i wrote like last year i think idk just felt like posting it. yeah..rate/comment okai.
• Date: 12/11/2008
• Tags: death

Death is something that can’t be heard
Death is silent
Death is slow
Death is fast
Death will come when it’s your time
Death will lead you into the afterlife
Many want death’s grace to fall upon them
Yet when it doesn’t answer their wishes
People take matters into their own hands
Death is something I crave, I want
Death can be an adventure
I’m going to give death a shot

Comments

[l Tsuna l]

nice poem!!!
and no, condone the problems...
afterlife does exist >:/
4/5

[goldenheart8]

Why are you craving for death? Don't you have a happy life? Anyway it's nice as a poem.

[Condone the problems]

Death can be heard if you have a higher social rank. If you are among me and many others, you will die and be forgotten. Death comes when it pleases. There is no afterlife. People can dream, it doesn't make them right. If you think death is an intangible entity, you are mistaken. Suicidal people don't wait for death, they kill themselves.
Why do you want to die? So many people would be sad, hurt, broken. There's no reason for it. You have a great life. And that is when you were my age?

[firel rouge]

Nice!!