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A ray of light
Falling from the endless height
A ray of light
Falling out of sight
A ray of light
Falling with such might
A black sun
Falling away, finally done
A black sun
Falling towards a gun
A black sun
Falling to none
A stupid star
Falling so far
A stupid star
Falling from sky to jar
A stupid star
Falling against the bar
- Title: Falling
- Artist: Shy-Star
- Description: Random emo poem. I know the ending is a bit odd...
- Date: 12/10/2008
- Tags: falling
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Piper baggins - 06/26/2009
- okey dokey
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- F r u i t y Flatulence - 06/26/2009
- ?
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 12/12/2008
- Yes, weak ending aside, it was not bad. PErhaps a little imagery work is needed. 2.75/5.
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- ceza b - 12/10/2008
- minus the ending, i loved it
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- hey girl hey XD - 12/10/2008
- umm...ok
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