Sweet-smelling breeze

• Artist: Farrelei
• Description: Love brings about many different emotions and feelings within me.
  Usually the poems I write while feeling this way are dark, cold and depressing.
  To tell the truth I felt depressed and cold while writing this, too. But, for some reason, I feel so peaceful whenever I read it.
  I hope you do too ^^'
• Date: 11/30/2008
• Tags: sweetsmelling breeze

Like a sweet-smelling breeze,
Life blows gentle and cold against your face.
Everything washed away with that breeze...
All worries,
All fear,
All memories,
All cares.

Others are smiling and jumping around -
They are leaves falling softly from branches,
Flittering past.

All you need is yourself.
The path lit up by the autumn sun,
Filtered by burning autumn trees around you,
There is only one person - breeze so cool,
So gentle...

Comments

[whitejade13]

Yes it does have a peacful way about it. It's a very nice poem i really like it. 5/5

[LETITRIP]

Very good Farr,speachless really.

[EyeYannie]

Beautiful!