Death not being the way

• Artist: xD-POP TART-Dx
• Description: my best poem
• Date: 11/16/2008
• Tags: death bein

by 18tyler
I held the knife so close to my heart.
Like a foolish child I sat and I cried,
Didn't realize what I had done, what I had tried.
Tears mixed with blood, falling slowly to the ground.
Covered in blood, pulled myself up, in tears scribed:

"To those who don't care, to those who can't see,
Never Give up always thrive to be free."
Didn't know how many people would later cry.
"Tried to be free, yet I see this isn't the way."

Friend at the door, ran as fast as she could.
Too weak to say I'm sorry, otherwise I would.
In tears, looked at the blue sad day.
When you come and see this pool of blood and me,
This isn't the way my life was meant to be.

Comments

[shy_hotgrl101]

Thats reallyamazing. The world needs a person lik u with ur talent, xpecially with all this crap in the world. Show the world we teens arent all piles of s**t (oh crap, we can do something productive!) smile

[GoaMagara]

You should give yourself a pat on the back. This is one of the most profound poems I have read in a long time. This truely has a great moral behind it. Kudos.

[darkangel9194]

Wow.....that's the best I've read.