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When you~~
When you blow you're kiss,
I grab it...<3
And place it on my lips.
When you and I kiss,
In my dreams..
I feel as if.....<3
You were,
Here with me...
Looking at me...
When You say passion words,
Butterflies...
Come upon me..
And,All I see is blur.
When you look at me,
Glazing into my eyes,
It feels like....<3
I'll die <3
Because when you said
Those words to me..
Those exact words...
{I love you}
They...
Made me feel..
Special inside. <3
- by charlotte_loves |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/05/2008 |
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- Title: when you
- Artist: charlotte_loves
- Description: When you...Is about my ex boyfriend <3
- Date: 11/05/2008
- Tags: lips touch
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Comments (3 Comments)
- YOU DIE N0W - 11/08/2008
- great poem. 5/5
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- St Mario - 11/05/2008
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ooow, lovebirds are cute, are they not?
sort of reminds me to the past.
to bad about the smileys, but it's your poem, your taste.
fine with me girl... - Report As Spam
- Lord Rigel - 11/05/2008
- It is a nice poem but i think you should remove the smiley faces to add more seriousness to it...When you leave the smileys in it seems to be taken more comical than it is.
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