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charlotte_loves Report | 11/05/2008 1:56 pm

Thankyou For the advice ^^


Really well take it in.


I just made a new poem recently..


Here,you can take a look ^_^


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Hear this video..And,Read the poem.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a-cnHhOLdgQ





      Imagine dreaming upon a star,


Trying to wonder where you are.





   Are you in Heaven..<3


Because....:heart:


When you are loved by him..:heart:


He makes you feel like...


Everything is right..


And In the night...


He'd kiss you..


Good night <3





       Then..


He'd cuddle next to you,


By yourside,


And you..<3


You're just,


Wondering what will next happen,


He comes to you,


Lays next to you,


And..


He kisses you're forehead.


And,you  smile..


<3


        He....


Says you're his princess,


He says you're his life,


He says you're his wonderful protection,


He says you're are his true love..:heart:





  But then,


He cries on you're shoulder..


And you are..


Then..


Thinking of what to do,


Looking at him,


And..rubbing his back..


Saying,Its okay..


:heart:





   But,really..


You know..Its not..


Because...</3


You have her..


And..I [u]Had[/u]Him..





   You tell him..


"Don't worry..."


But...He looks at you..


And..


He says..


He loves you..


But..


He loves her too..





      You try and figure it out..


But..Nothing comes about..


</3


Heart broken,You fall to his shoulder and cry..


And you just try,


Try to make this night,


Just right..





     But..


He says he..


Is really into you..


And..He is putting his head on you're shoulder,


Crying..


And,You are on his shoulder crying..





          And..This night..


<3


it was just right.





      Because..


You and him..


Were crying together..


Inloved as before..


He said he'll never forget this night..


<3


He says he remembers,


He says he might..


But...=) it didn't matter anymore..


Because..you know she had him..


And he knew..


He had you..





      And,He kissed you goodnight..


And left..


With sorrow flittering out of the room..


He repeats in a song..


Oh How I love her <3


     


     She smiles..Tucks herself in,


And Dreams.:heart:


  


    Dreaming,


Thinking,


Smiling,


And...<3


Giggling...


=]





       Because..In the end..


Until she dies..


She'll remember..


How much..


He was in loved with her..


And..


She'll cry..


Even more..


</3


Just to prove..


How much she was.