Life's Monster

• Artist: Too Horny To Think
• Description: This is about the true demn of life and what it can do to a person's relatinship.
• Date: 10/18/2008
• Tags: lifes monster

My tears flow down my face
You have fallen from grace
You are cold and frozen
The sun has finally rosen
You do not unfreeze
Instead there is a cold breeze
Snow clouds cover the sky
I know I am about to cry
Where is my love
Her soul has gone to the heavens up above
This is a imposter
A cruel evil monster
It has taken her form
Now I am torn
This evil creature has won
My mind tells me to run
But I can't run away
She is my love so I must stay
I hold her close to me
I tell her we will forever be

Comments

[Paratox]

I love it but I feel like there could have been more depth to it.

[Fysh n Spork]

its a really good poem but at some parts it seems like you tried too hard. you might not have but thats just the thought that occurs to me while i read it. i liked it though. 4/5

[CrowleysGirl]

i hit 3 but i wanted to give it 5 i thought it waz amazing!

[Bubblegum Bishonen]

love it! + yeah, a song would b great.u even made every sentence rhymn.

[Amani_Rose]

You should serious make that into a song. I bet it would be beastly. I love this poem!

[MOD Karri]

very well written! I love it!XD