How could u

• Artist: I_Love_cookies_1996
• Description: how ur friend turned away and broke ur heart.
• Date: 10/11/2008
• Tags: could

i thought we were clear
i thought we were dear
i thought............
but i waS wrong.
how could you go behind my back and do that?
you lied to my face,
kissed me and said, It was nothing
touched me and let me fall
why would you do that to me?
after all we had,
after all we did,
now it was never true.
my heart was full
now i am crying deep onside,
cut and scarred
how could you just have left me
for her?
you didnt care for me, but you do for her?
why can i trust you now?
there is no way you can see me
i dont want to be a part of you
not anymore
she told me everything
how you wished 2 beat me
to hit me when i did something wrong
you lay a single hand on her,
your a** will go to jail
i am not gonna deal
u kissed me
u kissed me
u kissed me and said
IT WAS NOTHING
how could it be nothin?

Comments

[onionio]

I thought your poem was a bit bipolar. First it was portraying depression, then anger. it was a little confuzing. also, i thought it was annoying that you used pictures to replace words. That would have worked if you used this method consistantly throughout the poem, but since you only used pictures twice, it just seemed as if you couldn't think of a word to use. However, you had some unique ideas and you correctly spelled most of your words without writing the whole poem using text talk.

[101sarah]

i give it 10 tht is the most beautiful thing i have ever read

[cookie monster 0_0 rawr]

o thats good

[cookie monster 0_0 rawr]

umum um

[Angorez Daemora]

Yeah... re type that in proper English please.

[moonlight_desires001]

sorry, but I don't really enjoy chat speak in poems. It disturbs me quite a lot..... also, I don't like that bad word you used... how old am I? five? NO! It's only that I am a bit childish and thinks that bad words are not nice... it's still a good poem though...