alone

• Artist: kait x deidei
• Description: ok if you put cheer up emo kid or something like that i will delete your comment! i hate that your forgetting the most important rule of poetry. "you can always use you imaginatoin" or something like that. so no cheer up ,dont worry you'll get friends ,go die ,oh your life must be so hard or any crumy thing like that i swear people like that need their mouths riped off their faces! just put the poem was good or the poem sucked
• Date: 10/09/2008
• Tags: alone

alone i stand
alone i stay
i know i push people away
but only to see if they care enough to push back
sure i have friends
i just wonder if their real
we dont always get along
we dont like the same stuff
we never talk to much or hangout
and when i push they just fall
i try not to push to much
but it always happens
its a habit
im sorry if i upset you
im sorry
did i make you mad
why do you always hangout if other people
maby im jealouse
maby i envy your good friendship
i bet if they pushed you away you would push right back
if they fell you would grab them
if i fall you laugh
i guess i will always be alone
thats ok i guess
going in the world alone
coming out the same way

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Comments

[xXx-Insane_Princess-xXx]

lol it made me laugh XDDDDD
jk......or am I? good peom kait!!!!!!!

~from sis

[kryptic_valiance]

It's really good but the spelling and grammar errors distracted me a lot.
4/5

[HiroShinMozas]

That was actualy better then the song i made...God Damn it...

[Sweet Antheia]

The poem is very, very good!