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my friend is bleeding all over
and you are laughing at her
i sittiing there tied to a bed
all i can do is watch
she calls for me to be by her side
but i can't go to her
by the time you untie me
i go to her she is dead
i start crying and screaming at you
you drag me back to the bed
but i put up a fight
by the time you get me tied down again
you are bleeding on your arms
i feel you slap me across the face
and i called you a killer but that only made you mad
but why did you kill her she did do anything to you?
as i lie there think of an answer
i firgure it out you did it to break me so i will listen to you
but it doesn't work cause i am stronger then that
so you try leaving me in a locked room for a couple of days
but when you came back i am still putting up a fight
so you asked what could break me
and i said nothing can
i am strong from the love of my family and friends,
then i ask are you scared of a girl you can't contorl
and you showed me your answer by killing me just like my friend,
but i did have a weakness and that was being with you
and i told you that as i was dieing
i heard you crying cause you almost broke me
but you ended up killing me
so now i hope you think of me when you are with other girl
and i hope god protects her from you!
- by SmexiiTigeh |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/07/2008 |
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- Title: Best Friends
- Artist: SmexiiTigeh
- Description: this is bout a best friend and one of her friends who were killed around the same time by the same person.... i but wat i felt bout my best friend death in words.... it so happens the same time of her death i had an abusing boyfriend so it fit together really well.... this is the poem i wrote and when i wrote it i was crying non stop.... please it may sound emo but im not.... i have hard time puting my feelings into words.... some of my friends said it was good.
- Date: 09/07/2008
- Tags: best friends
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Comments (5 Comments)
- L O L L I P O P P P - 02/04/2009
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aww, hard feelings huh?
well i hope for the best for you, and good luck.
and wow, that is a tough experience, hope you wont be in pain anymore. (:
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- devilmaster009 - 09/09/2008
- hey i know that eternal pain so don't cry don't dwell on it know there are others like you it brought back my memories painful ones but it makes us strong unlike others its love
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- Ambi520 - 09/08/2008
- i dont care what others says but i loved it i almost cryd i would hate for some one to do that to me ever but im scaerd cause to guys like me and there bff
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- Divinita__xx - 09/08/2008
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I'm sorry you were going through such a tough time. </33
I think it would be improved if you used stronger language... I won't rate something you wrote when you were feeling so much! - Report As Spam
- aimike3 - 09/07/2008
- COULD EVERYBODY STOP WRITING DEPRESSING STUFF!! GOSH!! and the poem was just one big stanza. 3/5. good try though. smile
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