My Angel

• Artist: Rachmaster67
• Description: Once again, I as just sitting her and all the sudden I grabbed my pen and wrote it down.
• Date: 07/20/2008
• Tags: angel

You are my angel
My light and escape,
I feel my heart fleeting
When I see others fate.

I turn to you but,
Nothing pours out.
My soul is depleeting
Accepting the state,
The one I am stuck in,
The one you can't break.

I no longer see fate.
Why has this happened?
Happened to me.
Just once, I'd like to cry,
Pour my heart out,
And just sob till I die,
But my feelings stay
Hidden, even from my angel.

Comments

[UNKNOW dude ii]

woah dis is wikedly awesome ^_^

[Indicrow]

Very simple yet effective, one of the wonders of poetry. I enjoyed reading it. 5/5

[zahara_68]

i love this smexy trifflin skanky poem you dirty little minx !!!!!! wink

[Xx-Mystra-xX]

this is really good...
i reed it earlier and it gave me some
ideas about a poem...
well im still working on it but i should
be finish by today...
when u have time you should come read it..
but it'll be diffrent from what u wrote..a little
more darker...(i write dark poetry)
its called wingless angel