Frustrated

• Artist: Archfireangel86
• Description: Anyone who ever has had writers or artists block(or ADD) could relate to this
• Date: 07/20/2008
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Frustrated, mind blocked cant think so many things going through my head. Always thinking, thinking, thinking, never just one thing, always everything. Nothing straight forward, always twisted always crooked never straight never clear never unblocked. Confusion always there taunting, taunting, taunting, taunting me, teasing me with promises of clarity and takes it away. Always thinking never clear, never, never, never clear.

Comments

[elyphalant6]

I CAN relate :3. It was pretty good, but I agree with rosemidnight17. Try typing your poems like that and I'm sure your ratings will be higher.
Pretty good I'll give it a 4

[Karak15]

I like the fact that is is unstructured. it adds to the fact that she is confused, it gives it a certain flair that a "proper structure" can't. Besides poetry can be in any form, that's its beauty.

[rosemidnight17]

i read the rhythm but you need to SHOW people the rhythm. watch.

Frustrated,
Mind blocked.
Cant think.
So many things going through my head.
Always thinking,
Thinking,
Thinking.
Never just one thing,
Always everything.
Nothing straight forward,
Always twisted.
Always crooked.
Never straight,
Never clear,
Never unblocked.
Confusion always there taunting,
Taunting,
Taunting,
Taunting me,

see? sorta like that. biggrin wh

[QUW00SH]

its good, but u might want 2 think about adding a little structure 2 it, cuz its just one big paragraph.

[Abstract Rainbowz]

I like it!
=]
Good