The world will tell my secret

• Artist: mama cat is back
• Description: it is because this world knows one thing no one but me knows and it will tell it in a matter of time.......my secret are all told when I"m hated that is why I wrote this
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: secret

The world will tell my secret
But when
And why

I am no harm to the endless world of ours
I'm just walking for hours

The world will tell my secret
But when
And why

I am bashful in the eyes of hate
That's why I discriminate

The world will tell my secret
But when
And why

I sit and wait like god told me to
But reall my life goes on two by two

The world will tell my secret
But when
And why

Comments

[demon strait outta_hell]

That is a very good poem. I enjoyed it, and gave is FIVE. it would make a good song.

[Edward_Elric_18_20]

PERFECT as a poet myself you do an excellent job

[Ryan Russell]

Hmm. I like the form, but I was somewhat confused by the content itself. Some of the lines seem to be out of place, such as the 3rd line (I am bashful...why I discriminate)
I think the poem needs to explain itself a little better before it will score big with anyone.