vampires

• Artist: almaas
• Description: this is a short poem of when i was feelin down n wanted da whol freekin world to knw
  muhahaha + i luv vampires
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: vampires darkness earth blood

awaken to darkness on this place we call earth
one vampires bite cause another ones birth

he staks the night like a wild beast and
what was once alive will soon will soon be decessed

this red liquid just hightens his need
and the blood in your vains is what he needs

so when the last bit of shine dissappers from this earth
so you better watch out if you dont want to die on this place we call earth

Comments

[Dano51094]

its really good. its reminds me of twilight!

[Retanee]

love it!

[citygurl__63-wisteria-]

i liked the poem ur really good

[FaithEmblem]

Did you check over this poem at all? This spelling detracted from my ability to want to have remorse for this poem sad
It isn't completely hopeless, I think! I'm only a humble grammar nazi. Good luck with the next thing you write.