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Purity once had a name,
And beauty once had a face.
Life once had a meaning,
And once I was safe.
Once there was freedom,
And once I could laugh.
Happiness once was alive,
And once I had another half.
Once I shared her love,
Once I was by her side,
Once I felt I fitted,
So quickly that died.
Her grace so great,
Her beauty so vast,
All I ever wanted,
Was for it to last.
Fate maybe had another plan,
Or maybe she had another love,
But it all fell apart,
The hand too big for the glove.
Now it's all died away,
Happiness, joy, love; all memories.
Now I walk alone in this dark, dark world,
With no light to guide my way.
- by Moonlitwalker |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/29/2008 |
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- Title: Lost Love
- Artist: Moonlitwalker
- Description: My girlfriend broke up with me a while back.. i wrote a poem about how it feels now..
- Date: 11/29/2008
- Tags: lost love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- -RaiinbowSharpies- - 12/01/2008
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Great Poem!!!!!
10/10
I'm sorry, You seem like a great guy tho, keep your head up look in the future:] Good Luck:] - Report As Spam
- iixXGothic_SethyXxii - 12/01/2008
- I like it dude I know how it feels. 5/5
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- LOCO_SN1-YMM_MO3 - 12/01/2008
- I noe how Ya feel.....I waz Screwed ova by My gurl.....But u just keep Yuh Head UpP & get movIn forwoRd cuzZ derz More Gurlz Like Ha IN da world.
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- XxxSexGoddess411xxX - 12/01/2008
- i think it was beutiful...u seem like a nice guy why would anyone want to hurt you tht way? 5/5
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- xXZelzex9808Xx - 11/30/2008
- Depressing, yet very touching. I'm sorry for the brake up..But life is just that way..sadly. 5/5 ^_^
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- Keely_SaysRAWR - 11/29/2008
- u have this poem on your profile. its now meh favortie poem ^.^ i like it 5/5 dont get sad get glad biggrin
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- XxThe_Wicked_SuccubusxX - 11/29/2008
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aww this is sad..but i remember what you told me about your poems
i like it...even though it is sad
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