Crest and Delta: "Discovery"

• Artist: K-Hoopsta
• Description: NOTE: THIS IS A PREVIEW! ENTIRE PART IS STILL IN PROGRESS! Well, its been awhile since I last made one, soooo, I decided to make another story! The title I decided on was because I was thinking of Daft Punk, and one of their albums is called "Discovery". I hope you like it!
  Please rate and comment! I need honest feedback!
  Also, if you like, you can create fan art of the characters in this story, the way you think they would look! Enjoy X3
• Date: 04/25/2011
• Tags: crest delta discovery daftpunk

"We have to get out of here, it might happen again!", a voice said. "But, we don't know for sure... We don't know for sure if the full moon was responsible for that anomaly.", another replied. "Only time will tell...". "Fine, we'll wait until tomorrow."

"I told you we should have left before the full moon!" "Hey! Do you think right now is the right time to be yelling at me? We need to get the hell out of here before something even worse happens!" "Starla, I'm... I'm sorry." "Apology accepted, Adam.", Starla said. "Well, let's go get Crest before it happens...", Adam cautiously said. Adam and Starla quietly, and subtly towards Crest's(and Delta's) room. They slowly opened the door to see...

Sorry to end on such a suspenseful moment... But I am still wondering what I should reveal behind Crest(and Delta's) door. Well, if you want to look at the first part(If you haven't already) this is the URL: Arenas | Gaia Online If you want to predict what will happen next, I will have this forum for anyone interested in my series or if you just want to ask me any questions, or have a casual talk =D Here is the linkCrest and Delta Discussion & Promotion Forum :

Comments

[K-Hoopsta]

thanx for the feedback

[ViciousPacifist]

"We have to get out of here, it might happen again!", a voice said. "But, we don't know for sure... We don't know for sure if the full moon was responsible for that anomaly.", another replied.
"Only time will tell..."
"Fine, we'll wait until tomorrow."

that would've been much easier to read and less confusing. just thought i'd let you know for future preferences. [:
good content, though. <3