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Chapter 1:The begginning
“Mom!†I yelled, opening the fridge to grab my favorite soda and grabbed a handful of pretzels. Heading to my room to start homework I wondered why she didn’t answer me. I shrugged it off and answered the phone as it began ringing annoyingly.
“Hello, this is Zoey Hendricks, can I help you?†I asked sweetly.
“Yes, Zoey this is Ryan, I was calling to speak with your mother, is she there?†A hoarse voice said. It was a man, but I had never heard his voice before.
“Uhm, sir she is not here at the moment, could I take a message?†I answered. The line went dead and there was a crash from the living room. I grabbed the bat from the side of my bed and cautiously walked down the stairs. The window was broken and splinters from it were everywhere.
“Who is there? Answer me!†I yelled, my heart beating in my chest so hard I felt like anyone could here it.
“Oh, well looks like we caught a fighter, the mistress will be pleased.†A woman’s voice came from behind me. I twisted my body around to see a very beautiful, tall and elegant woman with a black sack in hand. She had flowing blonde hair down to her waist. She had shimmering blue eyes that put you in a trance. Suddenly, in one swift movement she raised a hand and everything went black.
- by M1dn1ght_Black |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/21/2010 |
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- Title: The Unnatural
- Artist: M1dn1ght_Black
- Description: This is a story I started writing a while ago and im not sure how good it is. Hope you enjoy it!
- Date: 12/21/2010
- Tags: unnatural
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Comments (2 Comments)
- M1dn1ght_Black - 01/15/2011
- okay i will. it is developing kinda good not sure though..thats only part of the chapter.
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- ThetaNine - 01/14/2011
- continue it
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