Kain's Pain

• Artist: NuM nUmS 08
• Description: This is made by me ["Rachel"]
  please comment and rate it if you have the time
  
  this is about a guy named kain who's wife died, i wrote this in my notebook a year ago and decided to put it up.
  
  ((please no mean comments)) :'(
• Date: 06/19/2010
• Tags: kains pain

i curse the heavens for taking away my only hold on life,
i have done plenty of dreadful things in the pass but
nothing to deserve this heart wrenching pain..bring back
my love!, how dare the angels interfere with something so
sweet as our passion. noone could have understood me as
she did, or kissed me the way her soft lips did, our
eyes burning with the deepest of love and hope, thinking
that finally i have found my reason for living in such a
hellish place were everyone looks at me as a noone..a cast
out to the eyes of all, except one...with open arms she
eccepted me..me and all my feelings to..but something so
great as this could never last long...the heavens jelously
so overwhelming, so discouraging that they decided to take
it apon themselfs to take away my beloved angelica, there
her motionless body layed..what was once so lively and
wonderful is now breathless and cold, taking my heart
along with her, she flew to the heavens above..it pains me
to say that even though i cannot feel her warm skin, or
taste her lips that were once so sweet..she is in a better
place, atleast..better than this hellish place we call
earth..even so it doesnt matter, once i pass on to the
after life and reach to heaven, there will be hell to
pay...the angels will regret the day they took away my
beautiful beloved Angelica...

Comments

[demonfoxer93]

Great job.
you expressed how things were between them and how the loss made him want to have revenge. Keep this kind of work up.

[Young EazyE]

Awww such a sad story =/ whyd they do that to her that's messed up