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As the small girl looked at her body in fear shecried. She said, "No! I don't want to die! I'm afraid of death!!!" When the stairs to heaven appeared, she ran. The next day no one cried at her funeral. She saw this and cried as her heart started to fade. When no one remembered her, she remembered her fading heart. When people talked about her without knowing, she talked to her heart so close to nothing. Finally, when her familly died. . . God cried as he remembered the angel that faded away... Still only he remembered the small angel girl who faded away with her misery. . .
Told you it was sad...
- Title: The Forgotten Angel
- Artist: rylenosha
- Description: This is a story that I wrote about a girl that no one remembered, except for one person. I warn you it's really sad.
- Date: 02/27/2010
- Tags: forgotten angel death
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Comments (2 Comments)
- CrystalizedSweets - 08/01/2011
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This would have been better if you added to it. put details. stuff like that.
4/5 though cuz it is good.
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- Kavadica - 07/06/2011
- Indeed.
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