- Darren closed the door quickly locking every last bolt and checking over to make sure he hadnt missed a single one, satisfied he turned quickly scanned the room to make sure nothing was disturbed or changed. He then procceded to search the appartment top to bottom for any signs of intruders. Finally satisfied that his home was secure and safe he loaded his 9mm (one of his many forms of protection placed in key places throughout his appartment so he had a weapon at hand no matter what room he was in) placed it under his pillow safety off bullet in chamber, takeing one last glance around the room he turned off the light and laid back finally at ease. Soon after the police arrived, they say that what was left of his face looked content maybe even happy, but who knows there wasnt much left.
- by botumbomba |
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- | Submitted on 10/10/2009 |
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- Title: Paranoid
- Artist: botumbomba
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Description:
Please tell me if there are any mistakes or if you think it could be improved, this is my first time trying this so please be honest.
This is a home made story. - Date: 10/10/2009
- Tags: paranoid
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Seargent Watz-It-TooYa - 06/15/2010
- Dude this is rlly good, keep up the good work. If u could read mine that would be nice,u dont have to if u dont want to. 5/5
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- AnnAlolz - 10/12/2009
- Wow,this is amazing!Are you sure this is your first time? ^-^ 5/5
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